I have chosen to nominate Haleigh Miller
for best Resident Advisor. I have chosen Haleigh because of all the hard work
that you can see on a day to day basis. Because she contributes so much to our team and the
amount she does for her peers. She shows her dedication in this job by
being a full time student studying pharmacy. This major requires her to put an
extreme amount of time into her already busy life for school work. This major
also requires her to have as close as possible to a 4.0 grade point average. Haleigh is one of these few that
hold a 4.0 grade point average; which is impressive as itself. But the
amount of time she spends on her floor studying is only matched by the amount
of work she puts into her floors community and her floor itself. She spends
most if not all of her spare time on her floor building the community that
makes up the fifth floor of Stephenson South at Washington State University
Pullman. She has many
community building Bulletin boards and Programs where her floor and herself get
together and decorate the floor; and they did a program to decorate for
Halloween, and that was a hit and to top it off even more; she had a program
for Christmas Decorating and her floor put every floor in the Stephenson
Complex to shame. The entire floor got together and wrapped doors in
wrapping paper and they all decorated the halls with snowflakes and Snowmen.
They also decorated the lounge with 3 Christmas trees and Christmas lights so
that anyone one the floor studying could have some holiday cheers. Nor does she have one of the more
challenging majors here at WSU but she makes room in her already insane
schedule for her floor and her staff the same. She doesn’t just share
holiday cheer but also shares that she knows when one of the staff members are
hurt. She not too long ago
gave me a gift bag for when I was feeling down after an exam, though she gave
me this handmade gift bag that had pieces of candy and a feel better card.
She doesn’t know it but this little act of caring made me feel extremely happy
that she knew and she actually cared about me. She hasn’t started this just
this year either but she started this way of being an RA last year when I was a
freshman. She came onto our floor 2nd semester and was great! She brought together that floor
and made everything work how it should and made everyone happy to be there but
because she has brought that skill to this year with her floor and extended it
to her staff. She is an exceptional Resident Advisor and deserves
recognition for being so.
I really liked this blog. I think it may have been one of the sentence patterns, but my memory may be wrong. The ones you had were great. They did not seem to be forced.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely struggling a bit, Jeremy. Keep trying, though.
ReplyDeleteX = starting with "because" clause… (this is a fragment. Remember: "because" is a subordinating conjunction, so it always need a main clause to attach to)
X = semicolon connecting a long and short sentence. (your short sentence is a fragment. Gotta have a sentence on both sides of a semicolon.)
X = semicolon as supercomma
Correct = Nor
X = "though"
X = ending with a "because" clause